Wednesday, November 9, 2011

Bed of Jasmine

I slept on a bed of Jasmine last night..
The flowers crushed and perfumed the bed
I remained untouched and smelling of you..

© 2011 Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury
(I accept the award)


15 comments:

Raj said...

So much said in so few words! Lovely! :)

Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury said...

Thanks Raj :)

The Orange Tree said...

love it,

smiles.
amazing and precise.

Rohit said...

really expressive!

Sheelonee Mukherjee said...

fragrance of words in a celebration of brevity.like. :)

tinkwelborn said...

Powerful little piece!
thanks for sharing.

magiceye said...

brilliant!

SUB said...

awesome...congrats for the award

cursemymetalbody said...

I got chills! I absolutely loved this - definitely worthy of your award :) Great job! And Congrats!

Here's mine: http://cursemymetalbody.wordpress.com/2011/11/03/poetry-oldies-4/

Krishnapriya said...

lovely verse..

Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury said...

Thanks everyone for reading & commenting

Gyanban said...

Drifted in from somewhere, quite liked your poem - so much said in so little words !

SprigBlossoms said...

What a wonderful usage of words to paint such a romantic thought :)!

Rajesh said...

Beautifully crafted.

The Orange Tree said...

amazing.

tasty as well.

poets rally week 56 is on, welcome in.
:)