To move with total abandon, not to think,
No more secrets not even from one self.
To be as light as the wind,
To be like the soaring imaginations---
So much said in so few words! Lovely! :)
Thanks Raj :)
love it,smiles.amazing and precise.
fragrance of words in a celebration of brevity.like. :)
Powerful little piece!thanks for sharing.
awesome...congrats for the award
I got chills! I absolutely loved this - definitely worthy of your award :) Great job! And Congrats!Here's mine: http://cursemymetalbody.wordpress.com/2011/11/03/poetry-oldies-4/
Thanks everyone for reading & commenting
Drifted in from somewhere, quite liked your poem - so much said in so little words !
What a wonderful usage of words to paint such a romantic thought :)!
amazing.tasty as well.poets rally week 56 is on, welcome in.:)
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