I know loving,
The only act that comes naturally to me
The rest are all conjured specs of moonshine
There was a time when I thought
I had reached deeper than the deepest..
But the more I love..the deeper I dive
Till I discover, I’ve reached deeper than the deepest
And yet there is scope for more-
Eternity is a small sphere
The future but full of possibilities…
© 2011 Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury
written for Thursday Poet’s Rally week 47
( Image courtesy Google)
19 comments:
Ironically most of us are so afraid to fall in love!
This is such a beautiful poem I love the idea that love continues to deepen and grow I believe that as well
We should not be afraid of loving deeply coz it will come back to us in a way we least expect it. Nice piece.
This poem is such an outpouring of love, life and sincerity that it reveals your true nature:))
Short. yet succinct - I found myself wanting to read more. I love the phrasing "The rest are all conjured specs of moonshine".
Some fall deeper and deeper in love...we never fell, we just rose...love gave us wing...and we both are together and free...who says love ties you down...
Lovely poem...
Cheers!
SUB
Loved this line-
'Yet there is scope for more eternity' '
Indeed :)
"The future but full of possibilities." Lovely sentiment and very true :)
super,
Glad to see you in.
Happy Rally.
Once hurt, we think before we leap.
Such is experience, a double edged sword. The more we are scared of hurt, the more we withdraw into our shell.
I like your thoughts, all neatly packed into a poetry parcel.
bravo...
wise words.
Glad to see you in.
Happy Rally.
Yes Purba..hate is easier & legitimate..Thanks so much everyone for your precious comments and reading :)
hey...
check this out...you've been awarded!
http://thedamnedwriter.blogspot.com/2011/07/spotlightcameraapplause.html
:):)
hey...
check this out...you've been awarded!
http://thedamnedwriter.blogspot.com/2011/07/spotlightcameraapplause.html
:):)
Loving should never scare us. :)
You are very brave. A beautiful, inspirational poem.
I am a true romantic and believe in the power of love. Afterall, to give love is to receive love.
As far as I'm concerned, one can never have enough love.
Beautifully expressed.
Thanks folks..am one lazy blogger..and finding so many of you taking the time to read me..actually amazes me..and Im so much more grateful..Thanks.. A special thanks to Indu :)
how are you?
invite you to take our week 5 writing challenge,
anything comes to mind would be awesome to share,
smiles.
hope to see your in.
Happy Saturday.
Post a Comment