In evenings, when emote is but a whisper
Take me in your arms and tell me “I’m there”
To cajole me in the twilight of my grumbles
To make landmarks of my fantasies
And be all but fantasy in itself.
Oh but for such a presence, of omnipresent dreams,
Never shall I feel, a stranger amidst it all
For evenings shall be cozy, and nights pervade them all
Mine hand shall never be bereft, of the warmth that I seek
The heart a sudden flip flop always in its beat.
When emotions as tender as dew drops shine
And sit atop the grass of my heart divine,
Then shall they mixed in elements so be,
That for ‘Me’ and ‘Thou’ there no place actually be...
© 2011 Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury
( Image courtesy Google)
13 comments:
I always re- read your poetry. There are so many layers to be unraveled.
Your writing is like that waft of Jasmine.
That was wonderful. Felt like old english poetry.Keep writing!
Thanks so much Purba " waft of jasmine.." nice..Thanks Ashwini for visiting :)
Heartwarming. :)
Kunal
it was like watching a dream...
beautiful
It's so 'devine'...came here via Purba's. Loved it:)
What a beautiful piece...
Like purba says, there are many layers to be unraveled. Am sure, every time i re-read it, I am going to take home something new.
Great job!
-Mi
So passionate... so heartfelt... so real... so close to the bosom..
A great piece! :)
decent effort
A query: i am bad at spelling but was the mistake in 'Devine' intentional? If it is then is it an attempt to indianise divine..."devi"ne? i find that worldplay rather interesting
saju depalan
Thanks folks :)
it was so heart touching.. like the emotions said out alooud in your words... just couldn't stop reading..
great efforts
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