To move with total abandon, not to think,
No more secrets not even from one self.
To be as light as the wind,
To be like the soaring imaginations---
* super duper thumbs up *
aggressive passion of 'illicit love' + 'gentleness of poetry' = nice post
well, if something is illicit it always makes us want it more and wakes stronger emotions, which is so precious in writing poetry... Nicely expressed. :)
dare not dispute your thoughts haha! my thursday~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/12/30/let-it-be-it/
Superb ma'am... . I'm a first timer here and was a pleasure to see so much of diverse yet full of creative posts amalgamated in a single blog.
Well written and provoking!
Excellent way to show what sex is all about. :)Awesome.
Oye!! Its awesome!! And I'm not kidding. So much told in so less lines!!! Cheers!
thrill of the forbidden does for sure! Enjoy the rally!http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/
Week 41 The Perfect Poet Award for you. http://promisingpoetscafe.wordpress.com/awards/the-perfect-poet-award-4-poets-rally-week-41/thanks and enjoy.
Nice one! :)
Lovely contrast between the lines - a thought provoking poem!
aww..thanks so so much everyone..im so overwhelmed..love
loved it...such a great thought in just a few well chosen words..
Thanks June :)
a couplet to say it all :) well written!Rally Week 41 - My Poetry
Ha ha! Love it!
i feel poetry in modern time is not only expression of gentleness,rather it has been used for telling rude tales of uncertainity and loneliness of modern day living.having said that,i must complement you for playing so smartly with the words and feelings.carry on the good work.
Admire your thoughts , signatures ,M !!!
Thanks for visiting everyone..and the appreciation..Nayan great to hear from you after so long :)
Extremely intelligent depth of thought.
Thanks Enchanta :) thanks everyone for reading
strange but true sometimes!
I echo every comment that came before this.. wow, Maitreyee!
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