Wednesday, April 6, 2011

The orbit of Sex



The orbit of licit sex is full of violence, sadness and boredom-

It is the illicit sex that inspires the gentleness of poetry....

© 2011 Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury


( Image courtesy Google)

27 comments:

Paulami said...

* super duper thumbs up *

Amropali said...

aggressive passion of 'illicit love' + 'gentleness of poetry' = nice post

Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury said...

Thanks :)

magdalenahermanstories said...

well, if something is illicit it always makes us want it more and wakes stronger emotions, which is so precious in writing poetry... Nicely expressed. :)

fiveloaf said...

dare not dispute your thoughts haha! my thursday~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/12/30/let-it-be-it/

Jingle said...

wow..

you smart.

Rachit said...

Superb ma'am... . I'm a first timer here and was a pleasure to see so much of diverse yet full of creative posts amalgamated in a single blog.

Thoughts Not Lost said...

Well written and provoking!

D2 said...

Excellent way to show what sex is all about. :)
Awesome.

mihirvatsa said...

Oye!! Its awesome!! And I'm not kidding.

So much told in so less lines!!!

Cheers!

lynnaima said...

thrill of the forbidden does for sure! Enjoy the rally!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/

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thanks and enjoy.

Romeo Das said...

Nice one! :)

Neezes said...

Lovely contrast between the lines - a thought provoking poem!

Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury said...

aww..thanks so so much everyone..im so overwhelmed..love

June said...

loved it...such a great thought in just a few well chosen words..

Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury said...

Thanks June :)

SUB said...

superlike :-)

Vinay said...

a couplet to say it all :) well written!

Rally Week 41 - My Poetry

frayedges said...

Ha ha! Love it!

nayan kr pathak said...

i feel poetry in modern time is not only expression of gentleness,rather it has been used for telling rude tales of uncertainity and loneliness of modern day living.having said that,i must complement you for playing so smartly with the words and feelings.carry on the good work.

JEAN PAUL said...

Admire your thoughts , signatures ,M !!!

Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury said...

Thanks for visiting everyone..and the appreciation..Nayan great to hear from you after so long :)

Enchanta said...

Extremely intelligent depth of thought.

Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury said...

Thanks Enchanta :) thanks everyone for reading

indu chhibber said...

strange but true sometimes!

Mona Vijaykar said...

I echo every comment that came before this.. wow, Maitreyee!