I'd like to walk with you
The distance between the rain and my tears-
Flowing in the same tandem..so profusely
That you wouldn't know which ...is which
© 2011 Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury
The distance between the rain and my tears-
Flowing in the same tandem..so profusely
That you wouldn't know which ...is which
© 2011 Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury
Submitted to Jingle’s Thursday Rally Week 41: http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.blogspot.com/I nominate Paulami http://ifdreamswerefireflies.blogspot.com/2011/04/seasons-first-rains.html
10 comments:
simply beautiful it is :)
I loved the second line.
A major degree of lonesome sadness very well shown. :)
Let the rain wash away your pain.
Intense ..
WoW!!!! that's all i can cay...
wow! it's beautiful!
Luna
http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/
Thanks so so much everyone..my verse would not be complete or understood without folks like you.
fantastic.
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Thanks so much. I really appreciate this :)
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