Tuesday, April 19, 2011

The distance between tears and rain




I'd like to walk with you


The distance between the rain and my tears-


Flowing in the same tandem..so profusely


That you wouldn't know which ...is which

© 2011 Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury






10 comments:

Paulami said...

simply beautiful it is :)

D2 said...

I loved the second line.
A major degree of lonesome sadness very well shown. :)

Purba said...

Let the rain wash away your pain.

Rachit said...

Intense ..

SUB said...

WoW!!!! that's all i can cay...

Mia said...

wow! it's beautiful!


Luna


http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/

Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury said...

Thanks so so much everyone..my verse would not be complete or understood without folks like you.

Jingle Poetry said...

fantastic.

Jingle Poetry said...

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Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury said...

Thanks so much. I really appreciate this :)