It was..the summer of 1978
He took a broom
And wiped the floor
Looked at the kitchen
And swiped it once more
The telephone had rung-
Some Thursday night
Voices from offshore beamed
“I’m coming Pa”
Some leaves had fallen
On the pathway pristine
He picked up the broom and swept it clean
The bed was made up for the 100 th time
White and serene.
Two pillows lay side by side
Smug and clean
He paced the runway
Knowing not whom to expect
The son had grown
In photographs suspect
Suddenly emerged a young man anew
Just like a cocoon
With freshly, speckled dew
They shook hand like elders
And sat in a taxi,
“Do I know you?”
The silences screamed-
The bag in the centre..somehow seemed insurmountable
To fingers that itched to crawl over in welcoming
A son, apparently lost
Bathed and clean,
He swung into action
“Pa I shall be late, with friends I’m having luncheon”
Take a torch, a wrinkled hand offered
The lights are dim, and the roads are bad
The lad and his shoes
Stopped in their tracks
“Im 28, not 58, dad”
© 2012 Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury
11 comments:
This is a fantastic one...depicting the distances between father and son...and the pain and aloofness...
kept me hooked, you have explained the aura so beautifully...
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Thanks Kunal & Piyu :)
A very nice post...
it feels sad, lonely and worst is the hint of humor that if you had laughed you'd feel guilty.
Nice poem
Hope more youngsters will read this.. Well written and so touching
Thanks so much everyone for reading & for your understanding..which is by far more precious.
You have this uncanny ability of striking a chord in us with your expressions and thoughts. Wonderful! - Kiran
Beautifully written. Heart-breaking but very true. How a son's world changes and how a father's world is always his child!
Thank you so much :)
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