Women submit themselves to men hoping they would understand their love but all men care about is themselves and their pleasure. However, not everyone are like that and I hope that I would meet someone from the later, not the former category.
@ Purba..the always story of the inevitable..isn't it? @ Vicious, Vyankatesh thanks so much :) @ Nethra..I do hope you really find someone like that..all the best
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four lines..thats all it is..but it asks for more..
Love isn't easy to make. More so when unrequited and with a loathsome person.
Yeah D2..@ Paulami yes it's a part of a larger poem..trouble is sometimes they are so personal that putting it up is a tough decision :)
The imperfect balance of give and take coupled with a lousy thing called "expectation" - tragic!
those 4 lines have a very lasting effect
Complex thoughts, nicely presented!!
Women submit themselves to men hoping they would understand their love but all men care about is themselves and their pleasure. However, not everyone are like that and I hope that I would meet someone from the later, not the former category.
@ Purba..the always story of the inevitable..isn't it? @ Vicious, Vyankatesh thanks so much :) @ Nethra..I do hope you really find someone like that..all the best
Very powerful 4 lines...:-)
Aha - it is a two-way street! Really nicely written, but it feels a little abrupt. Is there more before and after this stanza?
@ kartikay..very observant ..yeah its a part of a longer poem :)
Wow!!! It is so beautiful. So painful. And so beautiful!
So little words and such strong emotions.
Thanks Neeraja, Shashwat, Sub :) glad you all liked it
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