Tuesday, April 19, 2011

The distance between tears and rain




I'd like to walk with you


The distance between the rain and my tears-


Flowing in the same tandem..so profusely


That you wouldn't know which ...is which

© 2011 Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury






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10 comments:

  1. PaulamiApril 20, 2011 at 12:53 AM

    simply beautiful it is :)

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  2. D2April 20, 2011 at 2:37 AM

    I loved the second line.
    A major degree of lonesome sadness very well shown. :)

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  3. PurbaApril 20, 2011 at 2:41 AM

    Let the rain wash away your pain.

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  4. RachitApril 20, 2011 at 4:51 AM

    Intense ..

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  5. Subhrashis AdhikariApril 20, 2011 at 6:19 AM

    WoW!!!! that's all i can cay...

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  6. MiaApril 20, 2011 at 10:57 AM

    wow! it's beautiful!


    Luna


    http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/

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  7. Maitreyee Bhattacharjee ChowdhuryApril 25, 2011 at 4:38 AM

    Thanks so so much everyone..my verse would not be complete or understood without folks like you.

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  8. AnonymousApril 25, 2011 at 8:37 AM

    fantastic.

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  9. AnonymousApril 25, 2011 at 8:37 AM

    Hello:

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    This award will Not be given to poets who reject it or previously rejected it.

    Happy Writing, Thanks for the support!

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  10. Maitreyee Bhattacharjee ChowdhuryApril 26, 2011 at 3:35 AM

    Thanks so much. I really appreciate this :)

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