Thank you Thursday Poet's rally for the Perfect poet award
I nominate Cello Strings for the next
There have been times and moments when,
The urge to put every thing aside comes aloft my mind.
To be as free as the bird that sings,
It’s, swan- song from the skies above.
To move with total abandon, not to think,
No more secrets not even from one self.
To be as light as the wind,
To be like the soaring imaginations--------
Just to smile as I walk by
And count God’s blessings that,
I am free and free and alive.
To dance a jig on the crowded streets
That I am one of this huge congregation of humanity.
Big dreams do people dream,
But I have the urge,
For some such mundane pleasures,
That would fill my life, with joy unbound.
© 2011 Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury
Image courtesy: http://www.bigpicture.in/amazing-jump-moments-captured-at-right-time/
14 comments:
i like your bouncy write- free and easy, light too! tq for sharing maitreyee! my thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/human-race-human-waste/
Oh that could be so much fun to dance a jig on a crowed street I would love to see this and the image just jumps out at you nicely done
http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/09/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-week_21.html
vivid capture of those moments, when everything is open...
Thanks for sharing.
we all want to let go and be free as a bird sometimes. Very nice wirte!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/in-the-blink-of-an-eye/
Very few people count their blessings ! Nicely penned
I enjoyed your poem
It had an enormous sense of freedom.
I could relate to it.
Great Job
Free and innocent ..... where has that gone???
Well done ...
Isadora
http://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2011/04/05/yes-how-old-we-get/
Such a beautiful piece, made me remember those carefree moments I had as a child and now see in my own son
Thank you everyone for reading :)
Happiness is in enjoying everyday small things and just enjoying each moment! Very nice reading!
I love it, as in literally love it...especially the last two ending lines. :)
very enjoyable piece.
Thanks for the treat.
Happy Rally.
You made me smile :-) Thanks...
love it absolutely.
you rocked on it.
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Happy Rally.
Thanks a ton for the beautiful entry and instant participation.
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