Wednesday, December 1, 2010

If I..


If I give you land, will you make me a house..
If I give you the skies, will you be my moonshine
If I give you the birds, will you give me their flight
If I melt into you, will you be my sighs,
If I am the blush of the SHY, will you be my voice?

If I give you my dreams , will you build me a rainbow
If I shower on you my warmth, will you give me a home

If I give you my me...
Will you bring about a 'WE'


© 2010 Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhury

10 comments:

Anoop Vijayan said...

if my gf(supposing i had one) said me this...i would have given her a tight hug!

Maitreyee Bhattacharjee chowdhury said...

:)))..Hopefully U shall have plenty of such occasions.

Anoop Vijayan said...

Sigh!!!! :-) hopefully your words come true!

PRAVIN said...

इसमें सवाल और संशय इस तरह के भाव पैदा कर रहे हैं, मानों.... "तुम मेरे अनवरत सवालों का सिलसिलेवार जबाब हो या अंतहीन सवालों की नई श्रृंखला....?

Purba said...

This is so beautiful Maitreyee. Am sighing now..at a loss for words

Maitreyee Bhattacharjee chowdhury said...

@ praving sukriya..Sawal aur jawab toh chalte rehtein hain..inka koi ant nahin..shayad hum sawal hi kabhi ulta kartein hain ya fir sahi jawab humein bhati nahin..jo bi ho aap aya..acha laga :)

@ Puba am so glad you could connect with me on this, it 's an immense relief to be well understood :) Thx grl

P@ul@mi said...

its just simple and soulful.

Maitreyee Bhattacharjee chowdhury said...

Thanks Paulami :)

Blue Lotus said...

This is so beautiful..especially the last line..

Maitreyee Bhattacharjee chowdhury said...

:) Am glad U liked it..ya the last two lines kind of sum up the whole poem.