tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1955587035211534876.post6824059485698968993..comments2023-08-28T21:18:49.930-07:00Comments on pensive thoughts: Death: 'From not being yourself'Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhuryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08034550682396215305noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1955587035211534876.post-40031883224597020512012-01-09T01:03:11.046-08:002012-01-09T01:03:11.046-08:00Thanks so much everyone of you :)Thanks so much everyone of you :)Maitreyee Bhattacharjee Chowdhuryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08034550682396215305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1955587035211534876.post-21366920516856033542012-01-08T03:54:09.735-08:002012-01-08T03:54:09.735-08:00This is great, I'd rather die myself than live...This is great, I'd rather die myself than live forever constrained by societal strings, outstanding!rchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10390033530066470195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1955587035211534876.post-43761229985169069542012-01-06T03:33:09.503-08:002012-01-06T03:33:09.503-08:00felt salty dew between my eyelashes after reading ...felt salty dew between my eyelashes after reading this, something i always feel but couldn't scribble, Kudos to you. <br /><br />http://cerebralrendezvous.blogspot.com/P!yuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15644854722888125449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1955587035211534876.post-8186523861554693702012-01-02T05:48:14.550-08:002012-01-02T05:48:14.550-08:00Wow...great poem loved the last para. Lucky are th...Wow...great poem loved the last para. Lucky are those who could be themselves.Prashanthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06586986897407468626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1955587035211534876.post-42124048317398193882012-01-01T04:56:44.638-08:002012-01-01T04:56:44.638-08:00They all lead to the same destination,
But for mos...They all lead to the same destination,<br />But for most of us it is always that road not taken.<br />Fare thee well,<br />my unaccompanied companion!umashankarhttp://uspandey.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1955587035211534876.post-61826034595000469552011-12-31T04:37:06.471-08:002011-12-31T04:37:06.471-08:00ah this is powerful! "Society had of course o...ah this is powerful! "Society had of course ordered-<br />Be X..be Y..be Z<br />But never be you" - and the final line - so true! nice write, good seeing this up at the poetry palace blog!Ostensible Truthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08775793995809226782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1955587035211534876.post-77640656419132984022011-12-30T16:50:10.888-08:002011-12-30T16:50:10.888-08:00ouch! truth always hurts, good job though!
enjoy t...ouch! truth always hurts, good job though!<br />enjoy the rally!<br />http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/30/unhinged-reconstruction-meq/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1955587035211534876.post-55732411776296148742011-12-30T16:14:08.005-08:002011-12-30T16:14:08.005-08:00You touched a wound that is fresh in most of our h...You touched a wound that is fresh in most of our hearts.Rajhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01138309630324239186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1955587035211534876.post-70015450972383894302011-12-30T13:58:39.914-08:002011-12-30T13:58:39.914-08:00So true, and so very well said. A very good write!...So true, and so very well said. A very good write!<br />http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/another-will-be-born/Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/another-will-be-born/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1955587035211534876.post-91372123041416294792011-12-30T11:53:25.263-08:002011-12-30T11:53:25.263-08:00Enjoyed this poem ... interesting piece. Happy Ral...Enjoyed this poem ... interesting piece. Happy Rally ..<br />Isadora<br />http://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/i-was-the-child/Isadorahttp://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/i-was-the-child/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1955587035211534876.post-57157869096652619622011-12-30T09:38:36.265-08:002011-12-30T09:38:36.265-08:00I love the metaphor and presentation. This part is...I love the metaphor and presentation. This part is especially moving:<br /><br />"One day when each of us had died <br />Of good manners, maturity and society<br />And wrapped ourselves in the incense of the heavens ..<br /><br />We wished<br />We had died of being ourselves"<br /><br />Wow, you really socked me with the ending.<br /><br />~Shawna<br />(rosemarymint.wordpress.com)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1955587035211534876.post-61355495793225390362011-12-30T09:38:12.918-08:002011-12-30T09:38:12.918-08:00Beautiful and thought-provoking with an impressive...Beautiful and thought-provoking with an impressive use of metaphors and imagery. The identity of self is precious and that's what your poem conveys.Preeti S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08367363156339655332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1955587035211534876.post-34703845964339711232011-12-30T08:26:24.594-08:002011-12-30T08:26:24.594-08:00I enjoyed your poem. Life is such a precious gift...I enjoyed your poem. Life is such a precious gift.<br />Happy New Year!Sasha A. Palmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11930602874359925520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1955587035211534876.post-18429673727242478222011-12-30T06:51:39.193-08:002011-12-30T06:51:39.193-08:00fantastic story.fantastic story.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1955587035211534876.post-90903585669668465292011-12-30T04:14:21.167-08:002011-12-30T04:14:21.167-08:00It's a beautiful I love you, to be or not to b...It's a beautiful I love you, to be or not to be.The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.com